Something I think I did well with when I was writing my speech is that I remained on a single topic for all of the different paragraphs.
Something I think I did well with when I was presenting my speech was that I spoke loud and clear so that my classmates could hear me.
Next time I would like to improve on using props and more body language so that I can interact with my peers better.
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| Buddy Mark |
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| Teacher Mark |
Angam, I like the way you have started with a strong introduction and used evidence within your paragraphs to create specific and strong points. Your next step is to develop the way you link your paragraphs.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed listening to your speech Angam. You had organised your ideas really well and you had evidence to back them up.
ReplyDeleteYou are a confident, natural speaker.